i actually had to read this story twice because by the end of the first page all i had actually taken in from the text was that the auther had a thesaurus... i felt that was very unfair so i started again and read the story in full i found that the story very hard to follow it seemed to jump from section to section and that it didnt suck me into the text at all ,i feel that on a site were i payed to read this story it was very disapointing
i also found the dictionary extract at the end rather insulting if i needed to know what a word means then i will look it up myself
