Reviews of Pink's Amazon Adventure



  Offical BE Story Club Review

5/19/2004 
  Pink's Amazon Adventure by Prophet Tenebrae is a short story starring a catgirl named Pink who goes on a quest to save a village of catgirl Amazons from the catastrophe (cat-tastrophe?) that has befallen them. Their magic well, which grants them amazon powers of fertility and strength, has dried up, and it's up to Pink to solve the mystery and restore order (and bosoms) to the village.

PAA is a very whimsical story that feels almost like a children's fairy tale. The characters (especially Pink) are very innocent and given to bursts of glee and laughter. The whole story has a light-hearted feel, and it never takes itself too seriously. I think people will find themselves smiling as they read along. This is one of the few stories that I've read, which conveys a "comical" feel to it. Tenebrae also has a very nice attitude towards breasts, and this is echoed in the positive way the characters talk about and view their bodies. There are also two BE/breast play scenes towards the end of the story, both of which are enjoyable.

I'll end this review short, as the story itself is also short. The only caveat I have about the story are the "breaking the fourth wall" cutscenes which include some of Prophet Ten's recurring characters, which also appear in some of his other stories. It's sort of like The Chimerian Effect. People will probably either "get it" or not, but I think once you get used to it, it adds some character to the story and creates a connective mode for future stories by Tenebrae.

All in all, I think people will get a chuckle out of reading the story.

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  By : MeI

8/10/2004 
  I agree with Darkstorm. I was expecting the Teletubbies to pop out or something.

I would prefer at least a high PG-13/ low R.

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  By : Darkstorm

7/9/2004 
  To be completely honest, I found this to be the worst story on the site. It's simply childish, and that's a quality I find disturbing in a supposedly adult-oriented story.
I guess I'm one of the one's who didn't "get it", as it just felt like cutesy cartoon characters getting involved in porn.
I don't think it's the author's style, but rather the subject matter that brings this one down. Sorry.

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